Mind blowing circumstances
trapping your cells in instances
leaving to hope for chances
beg to hold life in full access.
Professional pretender
your a long lost traveler
arguing in front of the mirror
wait 'till one surrender.
Your a human enclosed with freedom
yet suffering from life's boredom
you, still aiming the stardom
but not knowing God's kingdom
15 comments:
Nice one! You have a knack on stringing words.
Nice one! I used to write poems specially when I'm depressed... Hehe then I suddenly stopped now I'm missing it din.. Hope to be inspired to write one again soon!! ;-)
I remember my days when i was crazy writing poems..Yours is nice and well, inspiring.
Cute poem.. I created a poem way back high school. It was awful. Buti ka pa. Hehe.
I wonder what inspired this poem. I hope you're feeling all right Jhackie. :) I did spend some time trying to figure this out. Hahaha I love poems! :)
remembered high skul days when i created a love poem for my puppy love jejeje (kilig)
Love this part "you, still aiming the stardom but not knowing God's kingdom"
Good thing that you highlighted that knowing God first is THE most important thing. :-) God bless.
nice..
best lost poem
sometimes people just is lost between carnal and spiritual life... ganun talaga, nawawalan ng saysay ang buhay kung wala si Yahweh. :)
love your poem girl :)
I used to write poems when i was in school and i must say you are so good at it! Keep writing ^_^
I admire people who can make poems. It's really hard and I suck at it big time. Keep it up.
This is such a nice poem with a nice message :) I used to write poems but I stopped na for an unknown reason. Maybe I'm just not motivated enough.. haha.. Anyway, keep writing! :)
Beautiful poem. I love this part because I can relate :( "Professional pretender
your a long lost traveler
arguing in front of the mirror
wait 'till one surrender."
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