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Flowering words they say
fountains of fallacy
brighter future they lay
two faced advocacy
flash floods and storms array
conquerors of vote prevail
feet of poor in mud will stay.
starve in hunger day by day.
a smile with a gun on hand
fliers with money on bond
the heir in line of crown
a dynasty forever on throne
a democratic country?
under dictatorship of money.
prove me wrong then vote wisely.
place a man with certainty.
a time for you to show your worth
your the boss and head of court
stand on grounds with dignity .
be a man with love for his country.
18 comments:
I love your poem. It's a creative way of expressing ones political opinion.
i am still praying there is hope in this country in terms of politics .. but maybe not in our life time .. I hope change come upon in this country soon ...
I wonder how much time you spent to complete this poem. You must have a lot of dedication for the country to be able to write this. Good piece. :)
This one's very timely for this Monday's election. I guess we don't have the right to complain about our leaders if we don't exercise our right to vote.
Nice piece. There's still hope in our country. I hope this coming election, we'll choose our leaders wisely.
Filipinos deserve the best leaders and we owe it to ourselves to vote responsibly against all odds.
Let us all pray that everyone that will be voting would realize the importance of what they need to do, not just for the country but for themselves and their family.
Let us all pray that everyone that will be voting would realize the importance of what they need to do, not just for the country but for themselves and their family.
very nice poem with timely message. I am just curious , how old na you? you know how to make use of good rhyme and nice choice of words.
I'm 17 po :) Thanks for the nice comments. Miss Rochkristin, I took 1 hour po.
OMG! This poem speaks the truth. You're good ha. Way to go!
You are such a great poet Jackie! I love how you picked the right words to rhyme with each other, and wow, this message of the poem is very clear! =)
*the message* -sorry =)
Nice poem about vote. I hope people practice responsible voting this coming Monday.
Great poem. Not a lot of people would take the time to write about voting and encouraging others to vote right and you did a great job on this.
wow nice poem. I hope that Filipinos will vote wisely this time.
Nice poem. Very fitting to the voting season. I do hope there's a chance to get the deserving people up there!
Very timely poem. It's good to know that you're only 17 and yet you show concern on politics.
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